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Another flash fic! :happybounce: The prompt was 'Broken teacup' and it came from the delightfully terrible :icontheterrorofthedeep:
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Given 2013-09-03
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Leonca Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Delightful. =D I especially liked the way Harry connects with the bees. Bee curtains and waiters? Awesome.

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PandaCat-Productions Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Student Writer
:iconshaplz: Heeeee, thankies very much!
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Flesh-unfolding Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
Great dialogue. Hooked me in right away, as did Harry's voice.
A fun and delightful read :)
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PandaCat-Productions Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Writer
Thankies very much! :icondummywooplz:
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C-A-Harland Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Student Writer
Wonderful story, I love the way the characters are portrayed and the whole thing with the bees is just great. 
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PandaCat-Productions Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Writer
:dummy: Why thankies! :heart:
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Toogadab137 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Professional Photographer
abosoloutly spelndid! Please, make a sequel! i beg of you!
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:iconpandacat-productions:
PandaCat-Productions Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Writer
Thankies! :iconshaplz: I don't have any plans to write a sequel, though I may some day. :D
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Toogadab137 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Professional Photographer
Awwwwww....
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Karinta Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Student General Artist
BRILLIANT!!! I love the little ways in which that world differs from this one. :huggle:
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:iconpandacat-productions:
PandaCat-Productions Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much! :happybounce:
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Karinta Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome!
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Euxiom Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
Those adorable rascals got you a DD :iconlawooplz:
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PandaCat-Productions Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Writer
They diiiiiiid. :icondummywooplz: Such wascally wascals!
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inknalcohol Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013   Writer
I know!!  It's awesome, is it not?  Even Jesse agreed!
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Euxiom Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
SO awesome. :la:
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LolitheLeopard Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Kudos on the Daily Deviation!
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PandaCat-Productions Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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LolitheLeopard Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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RaymondGD Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
Congrats on the Daily Deviations! :)
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PandaCat-Productions Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Writer
Thankies! :la:
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Schneefuechsin Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconcongratsddplz:
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PandaCat-Productions Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Writer
:happybounce: Thank you!
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
    Congrats on the DD, i love it! :dalove:
    Have a nice day! :heart:
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PandaCat-Productions Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Writer
Aww, thankies very much! :heart: You have a supa day tooo. :la:
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
    My pleasure, thank you :happybounce:
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inknalcohol Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013   Writer
Yes, it's taken me this long to read this, but it's absolutely awesome!  Love the bees, love Harry's attitude and curiosity and Vale's insecurity.

Marvelously written as per always.
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PandaCat-Productions Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Writer
:iconrlyplz: Oh mai Grim, such praise! Thank yooooou. :iconinloveplz: And thank you for the DD! :iconlawooplz: You squishy squashy you!
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inknalcohol Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013   Writer
:love:

You're welcome.  But I couldn't have DD'd it if you didn't write it so awesome.  So treat yourself to a cookie, or a LOLLY!!   mmmm
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lady-obsessed Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sooooo many things I loved about this flash fic.

Harry pulled a face. “That is more than I ever wanted to know. Please, don’t continue. My absolute favourite line. 
The fact that Pan sings to his teacups!  The song!

Also, the Bee Room sounds fascinating.  I do not think I would like to eat there though.  I am jumpy around buzzing noises.

So Vale is a Texan?Should he maybe not have a little more of a drawl in his accent then?
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PandaCat-Productions Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Student Writer
:iconrlyplz:

Heeeeeeeeee, thank you! :la: The song I think, will be a breakaway pop hit in the very near future.

The bees are very buzzy :no: BZZZZZZZZZZZZZ. :iconhumlaplz:

He is! I...I thought you knew that :iconohdearplz: And....I...The extent of my written texan is dropping the Ns D: How does one write a drawl! :nuu:
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lady-obsessed Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...I probably did.  But I do not remember.  I am a bit lax on remembering character details.  It's why most of the time I don't picture characters the way they are described.  My head comes up with its own interpretation.Keir finds it funny and makes me describe how I see his characters, which is usually way off what they should be...

As to writing drawls, I wouldn't say I'm an expert but I know at the very least you could probably change 'I' to 'Ah', so 'I broke Pan's teacup' would be 'Ah broke Pan's teacup.'  You sort of start to get the sound.  And dropping 'g' is always good too.
There's a whole wiki article about Texan Englishpart of me cannot believe such a thing: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Texan_En…. Maybe it'll be useful?
You wouldn't want to overdo it though.  Just a few signs that he's got an accent. 
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PandaCat-Productions Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Student Writer
:no: You should get an elephant to remember things for you. You silly old sock :la: But I think it's good! Every reader has something slighty different in their head.

Ah, yes, I do drop the Gs :eager: I meant to say G before, not N. :XD: I'm not sure I would go so far as changing I to Ah though. I think it's best to leave things like that to the reader's imagination, otherwise, the dialogue starts to look very odd. Writing accents is a delicate balance :iconohdearplz: Dropping letters is usually my mainstay for accents.

A wikipedia article! :noes: A WHOLE ONE. ooooh, it is useful :eager:
 
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Euxiom Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
MAGISQUEEZE

IT WILL SOLVE ALL YOUR PROBLEMS, THE MAGIC EQUIVALENT OF DUCK TAPE.

Oh god this was wonderful where the fuck do I start! HARRY I LIKE HARRY HE IS A GOOD GRUFF CAFE OWNER. And the bees are positively wonderful. and Vale.

it has been too long since i read anything with him i need to fix that but the part about Pan and the singing and...wow, priceless.
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PandaCat-Productions Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Student Writer
IT WILL. ALL YOUR PROBLEMS. EVEN THAT WART ON YOUR NOSE. :la:

Eeeeee, I love Harry and his bees :eager: THank yooooou. :heart:

:giggle: Oh Pan, you crooner.
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Euxiom Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
:la: you is welcomeeeee
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JeffreyRebowlski Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nice dialogue-very quick and believable 
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PandaCat-Productions Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much! :la:
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